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内容来自: 2018 Expert consensus for the diagnosis and treatment of patient with hyperuricemia and high cardiovascular risk
1. This might be caused by rapid economic development and a change of dietary habits and lifestyle and among patients with a higher socioeconomic status [5, 6]. Interestingly, sUA levels are higher in subsets of subjects at high cardiovascular (CV) risk,…The adoption of western lifestyle by natives of other countries and cultures together with a change in the socioeconomic background through immigration to Western countries,
在这个句子中我感到有3个问题:① rapid economic development 不应与change of dietary habits and lifestyle 并列,前者是后者的原因;② subsets of 应去掉,有它表示有心血管风险人中的部分人(亚群)sUA 较高,沒它表示有心血管风险的人sUA 较高。按常理应该是后者吧。③ and cultures是否应去掉。去掉后丢失什么内容了吗?
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