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　　目前为止，很多站友都参加过内分泌文摘翻译活动。很感谢大家热情参加活动热情！
　　拜读前几期各位站友的的译文和校对后，从中学到了很多东西。另外，也有一些个人管见和大家作一下交流。

　　大家都知道严复先生曾给翻译定下了“信、达、雅”的金科玉律。我想其目的无非是想跨越语言、文化等藩篱，使读者得以对原著能够充分、深刻、全面的理解、体会及运用。当然，不是所有的翻译都能够达到这一境界，但是应该说翻译者应该有这样的信念，即尽自己所能向着这一目标努力迈进。

　　我们都不是专门的翻译人员，在这里开展翻译文摘活动，无非是为了自我学习，或向其他站友学习，和其他站友交流达到自我提高。总之，学习和提高是我们参加翻译活动的主要目的。即使我们是以挣分为目的，那么花费这么多时间、精力在这儿，总要有点儿收获才对得起我们所耗费的时间、精力或是其他。

　　因此，为达到我们的目的，或是至少有点收获，我们应该注重译文的质量。文以载道，一方面，译文是向读者展现文献原著内涵的载体；另一方面，译文又是体现了我们对原文献的理解。为使文献原著的内涵得以更全面的展现，我们要努力做到忠实于原著、原文，认真体会原作者的真正意图。对于自己不理解或是看不懂的部分，要多方查证；对于自己看得懂的部分，也不要轻易放过，毕竟因为文化背景的差异、专业方向或深度的差异、语言表达方式的不同、看问题角度不同，甚至语言、语序以及句子内部或是句间逻辑关系的影响，都可能使我们对原文的理解大相径庭。因此，对待翻译，不光要有全面的专业知识，较好的中英文理解、表达能力，还要有正确的态度和高度的责任感。没有这些，是很难做到让自己或别人真正理解原文，进而体会到原作者的真正意图。

　　呵呵，罗嗦这么许多，不是要打击大家参与翻译活动的积极性。是要给大家提个建议，明确自己参加的目的——学习、提高。至少，我们要达到此目的，或向此目的努力。

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　　第8期内分泌期刊文摘翻译活动又和大家见面了，希望各位站友踊跃参加！
　　本次内分泌文摘仍来源于 Diabetologia、Endocrine Review、New England Journal of Medicine 、Lancet 等杂志，选取内分泌临床、基础方面的研究进展共39篇（具体见附件）。具体活动规则、翻译及校对格式和以前相同（具体要求见后）。
　　需要说明的是，文摘翻译活动的目的是为促进各位站友共同学习、进步。希望各位站友对译文的质量进行精益求精的要求，不要单纯以挣取积分为目的。
　　谢谢各位站友合作！

活动规则
　　1、翻译一篇加一分。
　　2、校对一篇加一分。
　　3、很有价值的点评视具体情况加分。
　　4、 翻译认领一人最多4篇，校对认领一人最多3篇，校对时，同一篇最多可有2人认领 。
　　5、有关校对的特别说明：与原翻译至少有4处以上不同之处，或者不同之处4处以下，但是是原翻译明显错译处才能加分。
　　6、先认领，后完成工作，认领之日起7天内贴出翻译稿，如有特殊原因不能如期完成的朋友请PM我，如果没有收到PM，则取消原认领。　　
　　7、所有站友认领翻译及译文校对时，请务必以回帖形式认领，PM认领视为无效认领。
　　8、申请认领译文校对必须从已完成初译的译文中认领，提前认领无效。

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Meta-analysis of the relationship between alcohol consumption and coronary heart disease and mortality in type 2 diabetic patients pp 648 - 652
L. L. J. Koppes1, 2 , J. M. Dekker1, H. F. J. Hendriks3, L. M. Bouter1 and R. J. Heine1, 4
Aims/hypothesis This systematic review examines the relationship between alcohol consumption and long-term complications of type 2 diabetes. Meta-analyses could only be performed for total mortality, mortality from CHD, and CHD incidence, because the availability of articles on other complications was too limited.
Materials and methods A PubMed search through to September 2005 was performed and the reference lists of relevant articles examined. Among the relevant articles there were six cohort studies reporting on the risk of total mortality and/or fatal and/or incident CHD in alcohol non-consumers and in at least two groups of alcohol consumers.
Results Statistical pooling showed lower risks in alcohol consumers than in non-consumers (the reference category). The relative risk (RR) of total mortality was 0.64 (95% CI 0.49–0.82) in the <6 g/day category. In the higher alcohol consumption categories (6 to <18, and ≥18 g/day), the RRs of total mortality were not significant. Risks of fatal and total CHD were significantly lower in all three categories of alcohol consumers (<6, 6 to <18 and ≥18 g/day) than in non-consumers, with RRs ranging from 0.34 to 0.75.
Conclusions/interpretation This meta-analysis shows that, as with findings in the general population, moderate alcohol consumption is associated with a lower risk of mortality and CHD in type 2 diabetic populations.

饮酒与2型糖尿病患者冠心病和死亡率的Meta分析

目的/假设：这个系统评价是研究酒精消耗和2型糖尿病长期并发症的关系。由于关于2型糖尿病其它并发症的文章太少，不能得到相关文章，故本系统评价的观察指标仅采用了总死亡率、冠心病致死率和冠心病发生率。

材料与方法：在PubMed中检索的截止时间是2005年9月，而且检索了参考文献中的相关文章。在所有相关的文献中有6篇研究报道了无嗜酒嗜好者和至少2组酒精消耗者的总死亡率和/或致死性和/或突发性冠心病的危险性。

结果：合并统计分析结果示酒精消耗者较对照组非酒精消耗者危险性低。每天摄入6克酒精者总死亡率的相对危险性（RR）为0.64 (95% CI 0.49–0.82)。酒精摄入较多者（6克<每天摄入酒精量<18克，和≥18 克）总死亡率的相对危险性无统计学差异。致死性冠心病和总冠心病发病率的危险性在三组酒精消耗组（<6, 6 to <18 and ≥18 克/天)均明显低于非酒精消耗组，相对危险性（RR）的范围为0.34至 0.75。

结论/解释：跟其它一般人群的发现一样，本系统评价发现适度的酒精摄入可降低2型糖尿病患者的死亡率和冠心病的发病率。

　　 校对格式：
用红色部分标示出与原文不一样的地方。
样本如下：
第40篇
胎儿时期雄激素过多导致多囊卵巢综合症机制的回顾性研究：由实验、临床及遗传联合研究获得的证据
背景：多囊卵巢综合症（PCOS）是一种绝经前妇女常见的内分泌疾病，其特征为雄性激素过多、多囊卵巢以及持续无排卵，并伴随有胰岛素抵抗、腹部肥胖等常见代谢性疾病特征。尽管PCOS在临床上青春期期间表现最为明显，但是最新资料提示PCOS可能源于在子宫内的胎儿时期。
证据采集：对来自实验、临床及遗传方面研究并支持PCOS起源于胎儿时期假说的证据进行分析。
证据综合：在子宫内受雄激素过多影响的雌性灵长类动物，在成年时期会出现PCOS的表型特征。临床观察也支持胎儿时期可有潜在的PCOS起源。胎儿期出现雄激素过多症（包括先天性21-羟化酶缺乏症及先天性肾上腺女子男性化肿瘤）的女性，尽管出生后雄激素分泌恢复正常，但是仍然会在成年时期出现PCOS的典型特征。胎儿期雄性激素过多导致PCOS表型的潜在机制目前还不是很清楚。但无论如何，母体和/或胎儿的雄性激素过多症可以对胎儿期形成PCOS提供了似乎较为合理的解释，而且在一定程度上讲，可能是由遗传所决定的。因而，遗传相关的研究提示，通常决定雄激素活性或影响雄激素对靶器官效果的基因的多态变异体，与PCOS及雄激素水平升高有关。这些基因组的变异可以对人PCOS产前雄激素化提供遗传方面的联系。
结论：遗传因素和环境因素，或二者相互作用诱导的雌性胎儿的产前雄激素化，可以作用于不同的靶组织而产生成人时期不同的PCOS表型。

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文摘目录（全部初译完成）

ENDOCRINE REVIEWS
1.Gut Peptides in the Regulation of Food Intake and Energy Homeostasis (strollonline 站友完成初译)

2.Studies on the Physiological Functions of the Melanocortin System (nightstar 站友完成初译)

3.Understanding and Addressing the Epidemic of Obesity: An Energy Balance Perspective (漂亮瓶站友完成初译)

4.Adipose Tissue-Derived Factors: Impact on Health and Disease (strollonline 站友完成初译)

5.Emerging Therapeutic Strategies for Obesity (漂亮瓶站友完成初译)

DIABETOLOGIA
6.Diabetes mellitus and risk of bladder cancer: a meta-analysis (strollonline 站友完成初译)

7.Increased intestinal permeability precedes clinical onset of type 1 diabetes (nightstar 站友完成初译)

8.Vascular depression in older people with diabetes (月亮河堤站友完成初译)

9.Comparison of different definitions of the metabolic syndrome in relation to cardiovascular mortality in European men and women (漂亮瓶站友完成初译)

10.Lower levels of plasma 25-hydroxyvitamin D among young adults at diagnosis of autoimmune type 1 diabetes compared with control subjects: results from the nationwide Diabetes Incidence Study in Sweden (DISS) (月亮河堤站友完成初译)

11.Patterns of growth among children who later develop type 2 diabetes or its risk factors (月亮河堤站友完成初译)

12.Associations between depressive symptoms and insulin resistance: The Hoorn Study (月亮河堤站友完成初译)

13.Certifying diabetes-related cause-of-death: a comparison of inappropriate certification statements in Sweden, Taiwan and the USA (melody2007 站友完成初译)

14.Common variants in HNF-1 a and risk of type 2 diabetes (905b3 站友完成初译)

15.Paraoxonase 2 (PON2) polymorphisms and development of renal dysfunction in type 2 diabetes: UKPDS 76 (905b3 站友完成初译)

16.Autocrine insulin action activates Akt and increases survival of isolated human islets (strollonline 站友完成初译)

17.Evidence for the homeostatic regulation of induced beta cell mass expansion (melody2007 站友完成初译)

18.Exendin 4 controls insulin production in rat islet beta cells predominantly by potentiation of glucose-stimulated proinsulin biosynthesis at the translational level (905b3 站友完成初译)

19.The atypical antipsychotic clozapine impairs insulin secretion by inhibiting glucose metabolism and distal steps in rat pancreatic islets (905b3 站友完成初译)

20.Glucocorticoid signalling affects pancreatic development through both direct and indirect effects (88kg 站友完成初译)

21.Type 1 diabetes risk assessment: improvement by follow-up measurements in young islet autoantibody-positive relatives (88kg 站友完成初译)

22.Pancreas transplant alone has beneficial effects on retinopathy in type 1 diabetic patients (漂亮瓶站友完成初译)

23.Exercise training increases insulin-stimulated glucose disposal and GLUT4 (SLC2A4) protein content in patients with type 2 diabetes (goldenfruit 站友完成初译)

24.Decreased protein levels of key insulin signalling molecules in adipose tissue from young men with a low birthweight – potential link to increased risk of diabetes? (cplamst 站友完成初译)

25.Effect of short-term ACE inhibitor treatment on peripheral insulin sensitivity in obese insulin-resistant subjects (cplamst 站友完成初译)

26.Liver X receptor agonists ameliorate TNFa-induced insulin resistance in murine brown adipocytes by downregulating protein tyrosine phosphatase-1B gene expression (2ndrainbow 站友完成初译)

27.Sustained activation of the mammalian target of rapamycin nutrient sensing pathway is associated with hepatic insulin resistance, but not with steatosis, in mice (2ndrainbow 站友完成初译)

28.The PEA15 gene is overexpressed and related to insulin resistance in healthy first-degree relatives of patients with type 2 diabetes (2ndrainbow 站友完成初译)

29.The increased angiotensin II (type 1) receptor density in myocardium of type 2 diabetic patients is prevented by blockade of the renin–angiotensin system (cplamst 站友完成初译)

30.Diabetes impairs progenitor cell mobilisation after hindlimb ischaemia–reperfusion injury in rats (2ndrainbow 站友完成初译)

31.Effect of the aldose reductase inhibitor fidarestat on experimental diabetic neuropathy in the rat (88kg 站友完成初译)

32.Telmisartan inhibits AGE-induced C-reactive protein production through downregulation of the receptor for AGE via peroxisome proliferator-activated receptor-gamma activation (cplamst 站友完成初译)

Lancet
33.The DREAM trial (1) (谷子站友完成初译)
Steven E Nissen

34.The DREAM trial (2) (谷子站友完成初译)
Christian Herder , Stephan Martin , Kerstin Kempf , Bettina Rose and Hubert Kolb,

35.The DREAM trial (3) (谷子站友完成初译)
John S Yudkin

36.The DREAM trial (4) (谷子站友完成初译)
Jacobus Lubsen a and Philip A Poole-Wilson

37.The DREAM trial – Authors' reply (coffeenight 站友完成初译)

New England Journal of Medicine
38.Glycemic Durability of Rosiglitazone, Metformin, or Glyburide Monotherapy (coffeenight 站友完成初译)

39.A Placebo-Controlled Trial of Pioglitazone in Subjects with Nonalcoholic Steatohepatitis (88kg 站友完成初译)

注：绿色表示尚未认领的文摘

目前，初译完成。希望节后大家继续参加译文校对。

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译文校对认领目录

ENDOCRINE REVIEWS
1.Gut Peptides in the Regulation of Food Intake and Energy Homeostasis (李冬梅站友完成校对)

2.Studies on the Physiological Functions of the Melanocortin System (李冬梅站友完成校对)

3.Understanding and Addressing the Epidemic of Obesity: An Energy Balance Perspective (李冬梅站友完成校对)

4.Adipose Tissue-Derived Factors: Impact on Health and Disease (gz_lijin 站友完成校对)

5.Emerging Therapeutic Strategies for Obesity (leecabg站友完成校对)

DIABETOLOGIA
6.Diabetes mellitus and risk of bladder cancer: a meta-analysis (coffeenight 站友完成校对)

7.Increased intestinal permeability precedes clinical onset of type 1 diabetes (cplamst 站友完成校对) (2ndrainbow站友完成校对)

8.Vascular depression in older people with diabetes (leecabg站友完成校对)

9.Comparison of different definitions of the metabolic syndrome in relation to cardiovascular mortality in European men and women (gxjlhr 站友认领校对)

10.Lower levels of plasma 25-hydroxyvitamin D among young adults at diagnosis of autoimmune type 1 diabetes compared with control subjects: results from the nationwide Diabetes Incidence Study in Sweden (DISS) (2ndrainbow站友完成校对)

11.Patterns of growth among children who later develop type 2 diabetes or its risk factors (aranjuez 站友完成校对)

12.Associations between depressive symptoms and insulin resistance: The Hoorn Study (aranjuez 站友完成校对)

13.Certifying diabetes-related cause-of-death: a comparison of inappropriate certification statements in Sweden, Taiwan and the USA (2ndrainbow站友完成校对)

14.Common variants in HNF-1 a and risk of type 2 diabetes(lqr83 站友完成校对)

15.Paraoxonase 2 (PON2) polymorphisms and development of renal dysfunction in type 2 diabetes: UKPDS 76 (guoxuezhong 站友完成校对)

16.Autocrine insulin action activates Akt and increases survival of isolated human islets (88kg 站友完成校对)

17.Evidence for the homeostatic regulation of induced beta cell mass expansion (88kg 站友完成校对)

18.Exendin 4 controls insulin production in rat islet beta cells predominantly by potentiation of glucose-stimulated proinsulin biosynthesis at the translational level (guoxuezhong 站友完成校对)

19.The atypical antipsychotic clozapine impairs insulin secretion by inhibiting glucose metabolism and distal steps in rat pancreatic islets (happynie 站友完成校对)

20.Glucocorticoid signalling affects pancreatic development through both direct and indirect effects

21.Type 1 diabetes risk assessment: improvement by follow-up measurements in young islet autoantibody-positive relatives (happynie 站友完成校对)

22.Pancreas transplant alone has beneficial effects on retinopathy in type 1 diabetic patients (leecabg站友完成校对) (aranjuez 站友完成校对)

23.Exercise training increases insulin-stimulated glucose disposal and GLUT4 (SLC2A4) protein content in patients with type 2 diabetes (88kg 站友完成校对)

24.Decreased protein levels of key insulin signalling molecules in adipose tissue from young men with a low birthweight – potential link to increased risk of diabetes? (coffeenight 站友完成校对)

25.Effect of short-term ACE inhibitor treatment on peripheral insulin sensitivity in obese insulin-resistant subjects (905b3 站友完成校对)

26.Liver X receptor agonists ameliorate TNFa-induced insulin resistance in murine brown adipocytes by downregulating protein tyrosine phosphatase-1B gene expression (guoxuezhong 站友完成校对)

27.Sustained activation of the mammalian target of rapamycin nutrient sensing pathway is associated with hepatic insulin resistance, but not with steatosis, in mice (xianglan98 站友完成校对)

28.The PEA15 gene is overexpressed and related to insulin resistance in healthy first-degree relatives of patients with type 2 diabetes (xianglan98 站友完成校对)

29.The increased angiotensin II (type 1) receptor density in myocardium of type 2 diabetic patients is prevented by blockade of the renin–angiotensin system (905b3 站友完成校对)

30.Diabetes impairs progenitor cell mobilisation after hindlimb ischaemia–reperfusion injury in rats (xianglan98 站友完成校对)

31.Effect of the aldose reductase inhibitor fidarestat on experimental diabetic neuropathy in the rat (cplamst 站友完成校对)

32.Telmisartan inhibits AGE-induced C-reactive protein production through downregulation of the receptor for AGE via peroxisome proliferator-activated receptor-gamma activation (905b3 站友完成校对)

Lancet
33.The DREAM trial (1) (coffeenight 站友完成校对)
Steven E Nissen

34.The DREAM trial (2) (gz_lijin 站友完成校对)
Christian Herder , Stephan Martin , Kerstin Kempf , Bettina Rose and Hubert Kolb,

35.The DREAM trial (3) (gz_lijin 站友完成校对)
John S Yudkin

36.The DREAM trial (4)
Jacobus Lubsen a and Philip A Poole-Wilson

37.The DREAM trial – Authors' reply (gz_lijin 站友完成校对)

New England Journal of Medicine
38.Glycemic Durability of Rosiglitazone, Metformin, or Glyburide Monotherapy (cplamst 站友完成校对)

39.A Placebo-Controlled Trial of Pioglitazone in Subjects with Nonalcoholic Steatohepatitis (lqr83 站友完成校对)

注：
很多校对认领已历时较长，但未见完成校对，故进行重新认领。
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