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Research highlights provided should consist of a short collection of 3 to 5 bullet points that convey the core findings of the article. Each bullet point should not exceed a maximum of 85 characters including spaces.

我已近仔细检查过了，我写了五点 1-5；请问高手们，85 characters 和bullet points 是什么意思？Elsevier提供的，谁能指点迷经呀？谢谢！！

2012-08-28 17:21

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亲爱的success2009 老师您好，麻烦帮我看下我的标题：
原来是：The Impact of ClinicalCharacter,HistopathologicalFeatures and Therapeutic Measures on Prognosis in 94 Cases Pure MucinousBreast Carcinoma
后来改成：The Prognostic Value of the Clinicopathological Characteristics in PureMucinous Breast Carcinoma: a Study from West China
我写的是有关乳腺粘液腺癌临床病理特征及各种治疗对预后的影响，通过回顾性数据分析，得出统计学意义的预后因素。人群是针对华西地区的患者。

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后来改成：The Prognostic Value of the Clinicopathological Characteristics in PureMucinous Breast Carcinoma: a Study from West China
1.The Prognostic Value of Clinicopathological Characteristics 语言本身表达没问题，但是这里却少了“各种治疗对预后的影响”含义；其次作为题目这里的The常常可以省略了。
2.pure mucinous breast carcinoma 是乳腺单纯性黏液腺癌

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请教lz

Research highlights provided should consist of a short collection of 3 to 5 bullet points that convey the core findings of the article. Each bullet point should not exceed a maximum of 85 characters including spaces.

我已近仔细检查过了，我写了五点 1-5；请问高手们，85 characters 和bullet points 是什么意思？Elsevier提供的，谁能指点迷经呀？谢谢！！

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85 characters 这个是要你写“亮点”。总结成3-5个要点，每个要点不超过85个字符（Word计算字符数，包括空格）；bullet points这里是“研究要点”的意思，并未必是一句话。

A Bullet Point is Not a Sentence
Too many times a presenter puts an entire sentence as a bullet point. This defeats the entire purpose of the bullet point, which is to convey the key point only. It also tends to lead to the presenter reading each bullet point. If you plan to just read each bullet point, save the audience the time by just e-mailing them your slides and they can read the points on their own.

Reveal the Key Idea Only
A bullet point is supposed to be a short summation of the key point that you want to make. It should not reveal all you know about the idea, or there is nothing left for you to say. For each idea you want to convey, consider what the key point is and put that as a bullet point. Then add to the bullet point by the words that you speak during the presentation.

Use a Consistent Style
When using bullet points, make sure that they have a consistent style. This means that:

start each bullet point with either a verb or a noun – a verb is more action oriented and is usually preferred
use the same tense for each verb – the most common is the present tense with the past tense being the next most common
capitalize each bullet point the same way – usually the first letter of the first word is capitalized and the rest of the words are in lower case unless it is a proper name

http://www.thinkoutsidetheslide.com/articles/write_powerful_bullets.htm

2012-08-28 20:11

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success2009 编辑于 2012-08-28 20:16

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success2009 老师您好，看了您的意见，改成：Prognostic Value of the Clinicopathological Characteristics and Therapeutic Measures in Pure Mucinous Breast Carcinoma: a Study from West China 如何？

1、我写的是纯粘液腺癌，是Pure Mucinous Breast Carcinoma
2、其他人写的类似的文章，都谈到了治疗对预后的影响，但文题上只字未提，后来我看了一些写文章的经验上说，文章标题写主要的，其次的可以在关键词里提现。我在文中统计评价了手术方式、化疗、放疗、内分泌治疗对预后的影响，那么这里的标题上选哪个词语比较合适呢？therapeutic measures ； therapeutic methods ； treatment patterns ；或者 treatment model ？

2012-08-28 21:22

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success2009 老师您好，我刚刚给我新的论文拟了个Title: Influence of lentinan on Kv1.3, CRAC and Clswell genes of T lymphocytes from T lymphocytes from chronic radiation stress injury mouse.
我感觉结构不大正确，还请老师您给指点指点。还有各位战友也给我提提意见。

2012-08-31 17:11

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