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十一.标题页及附信(Title Page and Cover letter)

一个问题是：有些杂志需要在Title page明确各个作者在文章中的具体贡献，如何写？

1.标题页( Title page)

一般杂志要求论文标题及有关作者信息等内容应 单独双倍行距，称为 Title page，其内容一般包括：
1).标题（the title of the paper）；
2).所有作者的姓名及其最高学位、所属单位机构(the author’s name with highest academic degree(s) and institutional affiliations)；
3).通讯作者的姓名和详细地址（the name and address of the author responsible for correspondence and proof about the manuscript）；
4). 页眉标题（a short running head at the foot of the title page）；

What is Running head/title?
投稿的时候杂志往往要求提供Running head：就是一篇文章简短的标题，它一般短于题目，少于40-50个英文字符（不是单词是字符，包括空格）。
short title和running title在投稿时是一个意思，此外short title还有“简易目录”之意。

经典实例：

作者： Haixia Xu, Jimmy Zhu, Sinead Smith, Julia Foldi, Baohong Zhao, Allen Y Chung, Hasina Outtz, Jan Kitajewski, Chao Shi, Silvio Weber, Paul Saftig, Yueming Li, Keiko Ozato, Carl P Blobel, Lionel B Ivashkiv & Xiaoyu Hu (通讯作者)

期刊名称：nature immiuology

Contributions (学习如何写好每个作者的具体贡献)

H.X., J.Z., J.F., A.Y.C. and C.S. did experiments and analyzed data; S.S. did experiments, analyzed data and prepared the manuscript. B.Z. generated NICD1^M mice, provided the IRF8-expressing retroviral vector and assisted with the experiments with Irf8^?/? mice; H.O. and J.K. provided Notch1^+/? mice; S.W. and P.S. provided ADAM10-deficient mice; Y.L. provided GSI34; K.O. provided Irf8^?/? mice; C.P.B. provided mice with loxP-flanked Adam17 alleles and advice about experiments; L.B.I. provided advice about experiments and contributed to manuscript preparation; and X.H. designed research, supervised experiments and prepared the manuscript.

2. cover letter /covering letter (附信)
当作者将稿子全部准备好投稿之前应给编辑部写一封信放在稿子的前面。该信称为cover letter /covering letter (附信)。附信一般应包括以下内容：

1）投稿愿望
2）本研究或发现的意义
3）对需要说明的问题加以说明
4）对研究成果可能引起的利益冲突或法律纠纷问题加以说明
5）所有作者的签名，超过25个作者时，签名到第25个作者
6）其他要说明的问题
7）通讯作者（corresponding author/correspondence）的详细地址和联系方式，包括电话、传真和E-mail。

下面是附信实例，可供参考：

http://www.dxy.cn/bbs/topic/8838986?keywords= cover letter

2012-08-18 01:47

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success2009 编辑于 2012-08-18 01:50

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亲爱的 success2009 老师您好，麻烦帮我看下我的标题：

原来是： The Impact of ClinicalCharacter,HistopathologicalFeatures and Therapeutic Measures on Prognosis in 94 Cases Pure MucinousBreast Carcinoma

后来改成： The Prognostic Value of the Clinicopathological Characteristics in PureMucinous Breast Carcinoma: a Study from West China
我写的是有关乳腺粘液腺癌临床病理特征及各种治疗对预后的影响，通过回顾性数据分析，得出统计学意义的预后因素。人群是针对华西地区的患者。

2012-08-26 14:15

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请教lz

Research highlights provided should consist of a short collection of 3 to 5 bullet points that convey the core findings of the article. Each bullet point should not exceed a maximum of 85 characters including spaces.

我已近仔细检查过了，我写了五点 1-5；请问高手们，85 characters 和bullet points 是什么意思？Elsevier提供的，谁能指点迷经呀？谢谢！！

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fuyuehe
亲爱的 success2009 老师您好，麻烦帮我看下我的标题：
原来是： The Impact of ClinicalCharacter,HistopathologicalFeatures and Therapeutic Measures on Prognosis in 94 Cases Pure MucinousBreast Carcinoma
后来改成：The Prognostic Value of the Clinicopathological Characteristics in PureMucinous Breast Carcinoma: a Study from West China
我写的是有关乳腺粘液腺癌临床病理特征及各种治疗对预后的影响，通过回顾性数据分析，得出统计学意义的预后因素。人群是针对华西地区的患者。

回答楼上两位战友：
@fuyuehe
后来改成：The Prognostic Value of the Clinicopathological Characteristics in PureMucinous Breast Carcinoma: a Study from West China
1.The Prognostic Value of Clinicopathological Characteristics 语言本身表达没问题，但是这里却少了“各种治疗对预后的影响”含义；其次作为题目这里的The常常可以省略了。
2.pure mucinous breast carcinoma 是乳腺单纯性黏液腺癌

viphere wrote:
请教lz

Research highlights provided should consist of a short collection of 3 to 5 bullet points that convey the core findings of the article. Each bullet point should not exceed a maximum of 85 characters including spaces.

我已近仔细检查过了，我写了五点 1-5；请问高手们，85 characters 和bullet points 是什么意思？Elsevier提供的，谁能指点迷经呀？谢谢！！

@ viphere

85 characters 这个是要你写“亮点”。总结成3-5个要点，每个要点不超过85个字符（Word计算字符数，包括空格）；bullet points这里是“研究要点”的意思，并未必是一句话。

A Bullet Point is Not a Sentence
Too many times a presenter puts an entire sentence as a bullet point. This defeats the entire purpose of the bullet point, which is to convey the key point only. It also tends to lead to the presenter reading each bullet point. If you plan to just read each bullet point, save the audience the time by just e-mailing them your slides and they can read the points on their own.

Reveal the Key Idea Only
A bullet point is supposed to be a short summation of the key point that you want to make. It should not reveal all you know about the idea, or there is nothing left for you to say. For each idea you want to convey, consider what the key point is and put that as a bullet point. Then add to the bullet point by the words that you speak during the presentation.

Use a Consistent Style
When using bullet points, make sure that they have a consistent style. This means that:

start each bullet point with either a verb or a noun – a verb is more action oriented and is usually preferred
use the same tense for each verb – the most common is the present tense with the past tense being the next most common
capitalize each bullet point the same way – usually the first letter of the first word is capitalized and the rest of the words are in lower case unless it is a proper name

http://www.thinkoutsidetheslide.com/articles/write_powerful_bullets.htm

2012-08-28 20:11

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