woaiyaojing
我来用这些例句造点句子吧。。。It is quite strange why some members in this forum are energetic and others do not. Conventional wisdom states that poor english will be rejected within 1 months (I believe this is far from universal) and tragedy persisting at that time, or arising subsequently, are deemed to be garbage. Native writting in SCI has been a topic of chinese interest. However, Chinese often believe that their awkward situations in english writting are the inevitable consequences, of being old, or that there is nothing that can be done. Although still experimental, my present work has been found to be particularly useful in the improvement of writting throughout the imitation of native tongue in publicated article, with strikingly high practicality. 现学现卖了。。。

in Crohn disease, with strikingly high sensitivity and specificity.

woaiyaojing
今天的主题：忏悔信
关于忏悔信，也是一样的重要。如何很好的回答编辑的问题，也关系者paper的生死存亡。遗憾的是，我的忏悔信在澳大利亚的大哥修改下，彰显了一个事实：我的英语很垃圾。看看原文和修改的句子就知道了。
1，We have retrawed these pictures and added the definition of pathological score in “ Materials and Methods section” according to comment. Pathological changes in these pictures were uniformly presented as numbers.
大哥： Following the reviewer’s suggestion we have now redrawn these pictures to fix this and added the definition of pathological score in the “Materials and Methods” section. Pathological changes in these pictures are now uniformly presented as numbers. 是不是我心理因素？修改后的句子怎么就那么顺眼呢？真希望我能帮越南兄弟修改中文。
2、Pleasepardon our careless error. These errors have been corrected in reviewed manuscript by careful revision. Thanks for the kindness advice from reviewers.
大哥：Apologies for the presentation of the original version. Following the reviewer’s suggestions we have worked to fix these issues in the revised manuscript, reformatted it and also have edited the English expression for clarity by careful revision. We are grateful to the reviewers for the detailed advice.
我的写法还是太过口语化了。。。。。以后要牢记。兄弟们也要牢记。
3、The revised manuscirpt have been edited by a Australian expert. The name were added in “acknowledge section”
大哥：The revised manuscript has now been edited and corrected by an Australian native speaker of English, and this noted in the “acknowledgements” section.
这么简单的句子，大哥都能玩出花活。。。。哎。。。
4、These descriptions were added in “discussion section” to answer the question which was raised by reviewer 2.
These descriptions have now been added in the “discussion” section to address more clearly the question which was raised by the reviewer. 这个address more clearly。。。。算不算神来之笔？？？？写文章，也可以用上啊。。。
总结：：：单纯的模仿，只能应急。。。。。还是要多多揣摩才行。