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个人认为，对于大多数写sci的作者，包括小弟在内，poor english是最常被编辑们提出来的问题。找润色公司等等，也需要人民币。因此，小弟将一些经典的英语中的句子，包括描述趋势，描述大小等的句子，放入。。。也希望其他高手们也一起来完善这项工作。这样，以后，我们也可以写出比较地道的句子，而不被别人诟病。以后，每天10句，日积月累下来，大家都可以用。
1、表示与某某研究不同：Our results are seemingly at variance with a previous study that 。。。。（例如：evaluated FDG uptake in irradiated bone marrow and other tissues in rodents ）
2、表示与某某研究相同：。。。are（is）in agreement with the results of previous studies.
原句：The changes in the percentages of neutrophils in this study are in agreement with the results of previous studies.
3、表示某种变化可能是两种机制共同作用。当某种机制占上风时，会导致。。。变化，反之，当另一种机制占优势的时候，会。。。。。要描述这种东西很难。特别是在讨论的概括。因此，用这个句子：
... may be explained by the trade-off between... and .....
原句：The increased FDG uptake observed on day 1 in the irradiated marrow may be explained by the trade-off
between the infiltration of neutrophils and the relatively decreased cellularity.
4、称赞自己的结果如何如何牛，而且还有更深层次的用途：
Our results in... model suggest potential uses for ... in the ....... In a broader sense, they also make a case for using ... to ... other ......
原句：Our results in the EAE model suggest potential uses for [18F]FDG PET/CT in the diagnosis and monitoring of other disorders characterized by hyperactive immunity. In a broader sense, they also make a case for using PET to measure other metabolic pathways as functional readouts of immune activation.
5、表明可以用于预测。。。（例如预后，治疗反应等）
Our results demonstrate (or reveal) that .... can ..... and possibly allow early prognostic assessment of ....
原句：Our clinical results demonstrate that FDG-PET imaging can advance noninvasive diagnostic mapping and monitoring of intestinal GVHD and possibly allow early prognostic assessment of GVHD responsiveness to therapy.
6、用于讨论开场白。。
The initial question that motivated our study was to determine whether 。。would prove useful in
原句：The initial question that motivated our study was to determine whether molecular imaging with [¹⁸F]-FDG-PET/CT would prove useful in diagnosing radiation-induced haematopoietic injury.
今天先更新到这里。。。。我个人认为这绝对不是抄袭，仅仅只是用一下人家的结构而已。也有人说这样会导致全文的行文等看起来很怪异。但是我个人认为对于那些苦哈哈战友，这种套写不失为一种实用的方法。毕竟很多低分SCI人家的要求仅仅只是能看懂。。。。。。

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niu-niu 编辑于 2013-05-27 17:05

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It is quite strange why some members in this forum are energetic and others do not.
应该是模仿：It is quite strange why some illnesses become important and others do not；
这里存在一问题，首先是模仿句中，become 与do 是对应的，而楼主句子are 与do，不对应；其次句子中的含义指代不明确，理解存在2种可能：1、一些战友精力充沛，另一些不是；2、一些战友是积极参与，另一些不是；当然指代的可能性后面更大.如果是后者，是否改为： It is quite strange why some members’ participation in this forum are energetic and others not；更合适些
Conventional wisdom states that poor english will be rejected within 1 months (I believe this is far from universal) and tragedy persisting at that time, or arising subsequently, are deemed to be garbage.
这应该是模仿Conventional wisdom states that these acute symptoms will settle within three months (I believe this is far from universal) and symptoms persisting at that time, or arising subsequently, are deemed to be late toxic effects
楼主你这句话的意识是否说差的英文水平写作的文章一月枪毙，这种悲剧发生一致持续到枪毙那时或者在随后发生，这英文差的文章是垃圾。如果是这样，这不符合现实，英文差还能修改不是垃圾啊；第2点前面指代不清。
按你的句型啊，修改： Conventional wisdom states that the article with poor english will be rejected within 1 months (I believe this is far from universal) and tragedy persisting at that time, or arising subsequently, are deemed to be taken pains to revise.
Native writting in SCI has been a topic of chinese interest.
应该模仿 radiation toxicity in small intestine has been a topic of radiobiological interest；
我按你的句子模仿：
Native english writting in SCI has been a topic of student interest in China。
However, Chinese often believe that their awkward situations in english writting are the inevitable consequences, of being old, or that there is nothing that can be done. Although still experimental, my present work has been found to be particularly useful in the improvement of writting throughout the imitation of native tongue in publicated article, with strikingly high practicality.
楼主这句是否模仿：
Patients often believe that their symptoms are the inevitable consequences of radiotherapy treatment, of being old, or that there is nothing that can be done, while others believe there are more important issues to discuss in the limited time available，后面是Although still experimental, FDG-PET has been found to be particularly useful in the detection of inflamed areas throughout the entire intestinal tract in Crohn disease, with strikingly high sensitivity and specificity。稍改：moreover ，Chinese people often believe that the awkward situations in english writting are the inevitable consequences, of being old, or that there is nothing that can be done. Although still experimental, this present work has been found to be particularly useful in the improvement of writing ability by simulation the sentence/phrase in publicated article which native tongue is english, with strikingly high practicality。
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qjluo 编辑于 2012-01-09 23:49

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西方人的思维模式是一般具体型思维，擅长抽象思维，总是先概括后分解、先表态后叙述、先总结后事例、先整体后细节，由果到因、由小到大等。而汉语则相反，它是按时间顺序和逻辑发展关系由先到后、由因到果、由假设到推论、由事实到论证。如：

rul我原先打算七月一日去香港旅游，后来不得不取消，这使我很扫兴。
It was keen disappointment
that I had to cancel the visit l had intended to pay to Hong Kong On July 1St．

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l与英语相比，汉语抽象名词并不发达，汉语造句往往通过动词来具体化。了解了这种差异后，在英语表达中，要表达动作意义是，就不要只考虑动词，也要考虑用抽象名次来表达。

a)This is a further evidence that morality have been eroded in recent years.

b)This is a further evidence of the erosion of morality in recent years.

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